Hello! So, I'm turning a comic I wrote as a child into a novel, and here's a preview: "Ralph took a deep breath, then closed his eyes, but only for a moment. He then thrust his arms into the air and yelled, “Urgon!”. When he opened his eyes again, Rudy noticed something. Something upsetting. Something peculiar. Something like she’d never seen before in her entire time on this planet. Ralph's eyes had changed. Where his iris and pupil once were, was a horizontal line. Like a frogs’ eye, only it belonged to a human. Rudy was astonished. She could not believe what she was seeing. She let out a gasp, that was louder than she intended it to be. Ralph heard her and let out a small grunt. He put his hand up to his ear. Rudy covered her mouth with her hands. Her heart was pounding inside her chest. Beating 100 miles per hour. Buh-boom. Buh-boom. Buh-boom. Rudy’s instincts were telling her to do one thing. It was to get out of there. And fast." Any feedback?
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Wow, that sounds great! You seem like a great writer.
WOW! Very intriguing! What’s the novel called? Can’t wait to hear more about your progress!
It's called Eyes
SOO COOL! Wow! Can’t wait to get more updates on it! I’ve been brainstorming ideas for Trilogy I’m gonna write called the “Fin Trilogy” the first book is called Splash A Bit! (You can probably guess what it is about) Have an awesome day everyone!
OMG that is so good!
Wow, sounds great! I'm writing my own book too!
Ooooh i really like it!! Keep us updated about the novel!
Very nice! I would suggest itaclicing 'buh-boom'. If you need any writing advice, I'm your girl to ask!
Hello. I'm currently typing out a story that I drew as a kid. It was a comic strip, but I'm turning it into a novel.
That's awesome!!
Fun!! I have written books too!! What do you like writing and reading books about? Also, I like your avatar!! 🤗
AWESOME! That would be so cool if it was made into a novel! Let us know how it turns out!
Thats so cool!!!
Nice!! What is it about?
It's a fantasy. I need time to think about how to explain it...
That's so cool!!
Cool.
Cool!
Another book recommantion! The Fabled Fourth Graders of Aesop Elementary School is so good!! Happy reading!!!!
Thanks!
Thank you!
yep!
I seen people do lyrics challenge so i will do one. write your answer in the comments! "Ok, ok, I see what's happening her You're face to face with greatness, and it's strange You don't even know how you feel It's adorable Well, it's nice to see that humans never change"
Your welcome
Is it Your Welcome?
Your welcome from MOan!
Its a song from Moana ist called Ur Welcome
Your welcome?
It's "Your Welcome" from Moana! By the way, I LOVE your username!!! Percabeth is the greatest :))
Also i love ur username!
You're Welcome from Moana!
hmm this is a hard one
It's from Moana! The song is called You're welcome!
Maui!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And Heihei...
Your welcome from Moana!! :)
Hey guys!! I doing something new this week! Instead of doing a weekly book recommendation, I’m gonna do a inspirational quote this week instead! Here it is: Be the change that you wish to see in the world. -Ghandi
yeah cool
Nice quote :)
That's really inspiring!!
Cool quote!
That's such a great quote!
I love it!
Nice quote! BTW it's Gandhi not Ghandi.In india,people put word Mahatma(great soul) before his name! The quote is really inspiring!
Nice! I love that quote.
I love that quote!